LOVE STORY….. #LONGING #FridayReflections

Aanisha dismissed the video call with Abhishek, she did not know what she was supposed to do, “Was it really easy to see him after 24 years?” She asked to herself. She called him over the phone and without giving any hint about her feelings, yelled at him with a laugh “Sorry! for video chat you need to give a prior notice.” Really! I know you since you don’t even know what makeup meant.” He said with a laugh. She just laughed as if she agrees with his comment but her heart knew the pain of skipping a beat when Abhishek’s video call came. Though she desperately wanted to see him after 24 long years. After all, Abhishek was her first crush and first love.

After chatting with Abhishek for another 5 minutes, she decided to write their story. In next half an hour, she only wrote one sentence – “He was my first love.” She realized that she won’t be able to write anything until she will talk to him. She messaged him, ” Call me when you are free as I am stuck with my story and without talking to you, I cannot write further.” “Ok! I will call you tomorrow,” He messaged her back.

That night was the longest for her, as she will talk to Abhishek for the very first time in 24 years, about his feelings towards her. All she knew that she is a special person in his life, he respects her feelings for him from Day 1 but he never reciprocated and she never asked for it as well. Thinking about next day call, Aanisha slipped into the warm blanket of sleep.

“Good Morning honey! Hope you slept well?” Dev kissed her forehead and asked. Aanisha hugged her husband tightly, she knew the warmth of true love. With a smile, she sat on her writing desk and wrote “There are few stories which are complete when they are left incomplete. My love was and will always be enough to complete this love story.”


– Nidhi GS (Gratitude)

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22 thoughts on “LOVE STORY….. #LONGING #FridayReflections

  1. Shalzmojo says:

    Love does conquer all they say; but I wonder if she is really over the first one and is now consoling herself with the thought of having this present man in her life. She seemed to be having a lot of longing/excitement for the first one…….

    • Storyteller says:

      First love is first love but no one can beat the true love…. she realised the warmth of true love and smiled that love has no other definition but only love… she was not longing for the first one as she knew he was never belongs to her…and very first place she never expected anything in return for her love from him…. 🙂

  2. Alana says:

    So, what is going to happen when and if Abhishek calls back? She kind of left him hanging, didn’t she? Especially with a husband who loves her, she never should have led someone out of her life for 24 years do this – see, now you have me excited, meaning that your story worked. Well done!

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